(Closed) Which cocktail napkin quote sounds better?

posted 7 years ago in Reception
  • poll: Which cocktail napkin quote sounds better?
    Option #1 : (3 votes)
    18 %
    Option #2 : (9 votes)
    53 %
    It doesn't matter... they're both great! : (1 votes)
    6 %
    New option (please post below) : (4 votes)
    24 %
  • Post # 3
    Member
    7173 posts
    Busy Beekeeper

    I like #2 because it makes the napkin about the two of you and not about his parents.

    ETA: How about:  David proposed in March of 2011 during a snowstorm, exactly 32 years after his father’s March snowstorm proposal.

    …here’s another Edit suggestion to include punctuation and one more word – hope it fits!!:  David proposed in March of 2011, during a snowstorm; it was exactly 32 years after his father’s, March, snowstorm proposal.

    Post # 4
    Member
    9482 posts
    Buzzing Beekeeper
    • Wedding: October 2012

    “David proposed during a snowstorm March 2011 as did his father in March 1979”.

    Something to that effect.

    Post # 5
    Member
    310 posts
    Helper bee
    • Wedding: May 2012

    I’d go with #2

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