Post # 1
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Busy bee
I spent some time in Quark lining up some invitation suites. I’m not sure which I like better, or whether I should combine some elements of the two.
The invitation and rehearsal dinner card will be printed on dark brown cardstock with ivory and gold print. The RSVP card will either be ivory or gold with brown print.
The images are at about 85% size, so it’s slightly easier to read than shown. I couldn’t fit any larger zooming on my 13" screen, though.
I like constructive criticism. Don’t worry about being nice.
Suite 1: http://i751.photobucket.com/albums/xx159/chicagobride092010/suite1fixed.jpg
Suite 2: http://i751.photobucket.com/albums/xx159/chicagobride092010/suite2fixed.jpg
Ignore the attachments below, I don’t know how to get rid of them.
Post # 3
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Honey bee
The dots are very fun! I love it!
However, I do find the script font a little bit hard to read! If you love it, maybe just increase the size a little bit? The titles "Names, Rehearsal dinner, Please join us…" get a little lost IMO.
Really great job though 🙂
Post # 4
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Busy bee
It’s not entirely zoomed in in either. It’s at about 85% size.
Post # 5
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Honey bee
It’s only kind of distracting on the RSVP card. Both the other invites have a mix of script and regular fonts, but the RSVP is only in script.
I think the script looks great on the actual wedding invitation!!
<— Seriously impressed!
Post # 6
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Busy bee
I see your point. I’ll play with it.
Post # 7
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Honey bee
lol my DIY invites have all depended on manipulated templates… I wish I could just magically create an invitation suite like those ones. I don’t have the patience to pull that off 🙂
Post # 8
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Busy bee
I edited them based on your suggestions and I like them much better. You clearly have an eye!
Post # 9
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Honey bee
haha thanks! It looks so much more balanced now 🙂 Great job chicagobride!!
Post # 10
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Sugar bee
I really like the dots and the rounded corners.
Post # 11
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Busy Beekeeper
I love the dots and rounded corners! Great job!
Post # 12
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Honey Beekeeper
- Wedding: September 2009 - Barr Mansion
I like the first one with the dots!
Post # 13
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Helper bee
I thought I’d like stripes but actually the dots look FABULOUS! Dots are my vote 🙂
Post # 14
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Bumble bee
Another vote for the dots with the rounded corners!
Post # 16
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Worker bee
I too like the dots. If you are thinking about making any changes to the font (to make it easier to read) there is some great advice in a post from Mrs. Cupcake: http://www.weddingbee.com/2009/01/20/twelve-steps-to-creating-diy-wedding-invitations/
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