Post # 1
I need to pick one to submit for my homework tonight online. It took me forever to come up with anything to write and when the ideas did come to me there were a ton at once. So, opinoins?
the secret that He tells.
we are the broken soul, too.
Though I am very
Tender and long for touch
I cannot unlock (lace corset)
i opened Her,
delved too deeply inside,
and all i found. was abhorrence.
Post # 3
I dont know why but #1 really spoke to me
Post # 4
I really like #3. #1 would be my second choice.
Post # 5
to th op, I realize I am late but this is a very interesting writing style 🙂
Post # 6
@missmouse29: thank you 🙂 I’m taking a creative writing class and we have to try out different styles of poetry every week. She’ll give us examples of form and we have to mimic them in our own writing. This one is called cinquan which is coined the “american haiku” and consists of the the syllables per line being 2-4-6-8-2