(Closed) Wording Help

posted 6 years ago in Favors
Post # 3
11747 posts
Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: November 1999

I looooove it! So cute and creative.  The last line doesn’t seem to flow as sing-songy as the rest, but I’m not sure of what else to write (maybe take out “simple”) – I’ll keep thinking for ya though!

Post # 4
246 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: May 2012

Last two lines “to thank you all on our wedding day/ you made it more memorable in every way”?

I love it- just the ending was a bit awkward.

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