(Closed) Wording Help for DIY invitations!! :)

posted 8 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: July 2010

I think it’s fine. Run with it! 🙂

Post # 4
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Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2011

i think its ok too.. although i’m wondering about the line

“invite you to share and celebrate at their wedding on” Is it just me or would this sound better if the “at” were removed so that  it read “invite you to share and celebrate their wedding on”

Post # 6
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Blushing bee

yep, agree with the share in.  my parents are divorced and my husbands aren’t, plus my dad could afford to contribute more than my mom, AND we actually paid for 2/3 of it… so I think that is a good way to word it!  Plus, I always felt like even though the brides parents traditionally pay for everything (which, in my opinion is outdated and ridiculous), I don’t see why the grooms parents shouldn’t get a shout out either… These days with all the complications, “together with their parents” is a great great thing!

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