(Closed) Wrote my vows…feedback?

posted 5 years ago in Ceremony
Post # 3
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: July 2013

I like it, very personal, short and sweet 🙂

Post # 5
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: October 2013

Very sweet!

Post # 6
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Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: April 2019

i like it too!

Post # 8
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Bumble Beekeeper
  • Wedding: December 2013

@icetea:  That last line “I promise you all that I have to give and all that I am to be.”

…something bugs me about it. I know the vows will go by in a flash, but the “all I am to be” part. What do you mean by it exactly? Images of you changing into something bad popped into my head when I read it.

It’s hard to articulate, but I guess at that precise moment he loves you for you, the way you are… so the “all I am to be” part makes me think hmmm so she’s going to change? Why bring it up? There’s room for improvement? Etc.

Other than that, I think they’re short and sweet. I could never be so sappy haha I give you props for that. I’d be soo embarrassed to pour my heart out in front of people. It’s really sweet, though.

Post # 9
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: March 2014

I think these are sweet and will do just fine!

Post # 12
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Bumble Beekeeper
  • Wedding: December 2013

@icetea:  Not married yet but we plan on doing the standard ones lol. Not too original but I really just want to get it over with fast. Not typical bride, I know! I don’t like getting emotional in front of people.

Post # 13
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: July 2011

Lovely!

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