(Closed) Wrote our own ceremony please review!

posted 5 years ago in Ceremony
Post # 3
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: April 2018

I like all of it…the only part that seems a little unrefined is the Welcome, and the reason is the repetition of the words “Today” and “Together”  if you can cut or replace two of each, I think it would sound as smooth and finished as the rest.

Great job!

Post # 5
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: May 2014

@nona99 +1 i was thinking the same thing,

Also, the journey not a destination part, while true it is a bit overused, maybe make up your own lil quote there. Just a thought

Other than that I looooove it!!

Post # 6
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: February 2013 - Mansion House at the MD Zoo

I like it a lot. You have a lot of different elements in there, but I think they will flow together nicely, and I like how the handfasting is in between the two readings so everything is kind of broken up. (in a good way so it doesn’t get monotonous.) We’re using “union” too and I just love it.

Post # 8
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Newbee

I love the way the ceremony was written – two souls being united.  Having done the church thing myself, I now need something similar to this… as this feels like “home” to me.  My fiance is also not a “churchy-type”… we are both comfortable with nature as it evolves and changes.

 

Thank you for sharing this!!!

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